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Nothing of the Sort by ~Tachan17:iconTachan17:



To understand our consequence
To fill this broken gap
A lyrical posture
A stylized love,
Fall to fragmented death
But of course, live on.
Souls following their masters, their shells
Their worthless, powerless, hopeless shells.

Do I hate you?
My love, you know nothing of the sort.
Dearest angel.
Why do you hold your robe back?
The river has been passed.
When there is no chance of being wet
I fear it the most.
Plagued, dirty hands
Have no right to kill vermin
And have no right to touch the beautiful.

My untouchable, you know nothing of the sort.
Shall I live?
You decide.
For I cannot, and shall not.
A rapturous presence
Is there such thing?
Do you know what I mean?
When I say I don’t want to be alone?
Do you know what I think?
Inside this empty world,
What I say in this empty hollow
I am surrounded
When I don’t know where to turn.
This end, this melancholy, it is not you.
Is it overdramatized? Am I truly the problem?
Are my words as empty as my emotions?
Why are you important?
I suppose you have to be lost before you are found.
But can you be lost and never found?
You are not an object.
But I digress. For you know, my dear,
You know nothing of the sort.
©2008-2009 ~Tachan17
:icontachan17:

Author's Comments

This is not part of the contest Tabby chan and I are having.
I think.
Because it's not to submit two in a row I think.

...
*ponders*

...

Anyway...
I wrote this a while ago and recently found it.
I do this a lot...
Hate something, then come back later and like it.

<3

Whatcha think?

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:iconeekerknockers:
Ahhhh!

I like it!
I like the moods in it.

And the wording.
Most definitely the wording.

Yes.

I like it.

<333

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:iconlady-dragon-rider:
Oh, I like it.
Could you explain a little bit though, what it is about?? My brain has died and is not currently functioning enough to think of anything but snappy combacks and homework. :yum:

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Attention troops! Beatings will continue until moral improves!! That is all, have a nice day! :)

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:icontachan17:
This comment is how many years old?
*late desu*

It is about nothing.
I wrote this poem out of context, completely. I made things up in my head and wrote about them. So, it's different from most stuff I write, and it's rather abstract in that sense.

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A tantalizing possibility, Neku.
:iconlady-dragon-rider:
... now if ony I remembered what we were talking about. xD;;;

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Attention troops! Beatings will continue until moral improves!! That is all, have a nice day! :)

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